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11 Mohammad Mahfooz Hussain%u2022 The party had been ended before I reached there.%u2022 The school has been painted again.5. To keep the flow steady and develop a topic:%u2022 %u2018The Great Gatsby%u2019 is a classic novel that explores themes of wealth and ambition. F. Scott Fitzgerald wrote it.In the first sentence, the focus is on the novel %u2018The Great Gatsby%u2019. However, in the second sentence, the focus shifts to the author, F. Scott Fitzgerald, which disrupts the flow of the discussion.Revised for better flo%u2022 %u2018The Great Gatsby%u2019 is a classic novel that explores themes of wealth and ambition. It was written by F. Scott Fitzgerald.By keeping %u2018The Great Gatsby%u2019 as the subject in both sentences, the topic remains consistent, ensuring a smooth and logical progression of ideas.II. Ideal Scenarios to Avoid Using Passive Voice:Avoid using the passive voice when the focus of the sentence is on who is performing the action rather than what is being acted upon. If the doer of the action is more important than the receiver, the sentence should remain in the active voice for clarity and emphasis.Examples:%u2022 The principal will announce the results tomorrow.(The focus is on %u201cthe principal,%u201d who is performing the action, so the sentence should be in active voice.)%u2022 Sehrish prepared a detailed report for the meeting.(The emphasis is on %u201cSehrish,%u201d the doer of the action, making active voice the better choice.)